For critique...thanks!
Originally a folk song, this kind of evolved into a pop-rock song.
I’ve got the sky over me
And she’s over me too
Doesn’t love me anymore
She loved me like a sad song
Propped me up and then watched me fall
Now she’s swimming on a distant shore
Pre-chorus A
We used to dance and sing
Whatever happened?
Got me tumbling down
Like Jack after his crown of victory
Chorus
Let us sing one more song together
Let it go: Ooh La La
Ooh La La
Ooh La La La La
I Love you
V2
I think I’ll take a city bus
That won’t remind me of us
We never did that before
I’m just like the Seven Dwarves
And you’re Snow White of course
The Big Apple pulled you down for sure
(It done pulled you down, Lady)
Pre-chorus B
We used to dance and sing
Whatever happened?
Got me shattered all over the place - like Humpty Dumpty
Put me together if you can
when you find that you've got the time
Chorus
Bridge
I guess when I think about it
It makes perfect sense
If you'd leave me
You'd leave me with one more song...
(Make it this one)
Chorus